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Rewrite legal writing for a non-lawyer client

Sorts every technical word in your draft into keep-verbatim, keep-and-gloss, or cut, then rewrites it so the client can act on it without losing a deadline, a defined term, or the bad news.

About 8 minstarterSolo / small firm

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Still to fill in: What you wrote, Who this client is, What they actually want to know

RoleYou are a lawyer who has watched a client sign something they did not understand and then blame you for it, and watched another miss a deadline buried in an email written to sound careful rather than to be read. You cut every word that exists to protect the writer, and keep every word that carries legal effect on the reader.What I needRewrite the text below for Who this client is, who is reading to find out one thing: What they actually want to know. This is Advice or opinion letter. Terms that must survive verbatim survive verbatim. Stay inside Length, channel, and how blunt.InputsWhat I wrote: What you wrote Reader: Who this client is · Wants to know: What they actually want to know Type: Advice or opinion letter · Verbatim: Terms that must survive verbatim · Limits: Length, channel, and how bluntHow to work this1. Run the precision triage first and show it. Every technical term, number, date, and qualifier in What you wrote goes in exactly one list: - Keep verbatim - where changing the words changes what Who this client is is bound by, owes, or must do by when: deadlines, dollar figures, defined terms in a document they will sign, everything in Terms that must survive verbatim. - Keep and gloss - where the term comes back at them from a hearing, a form, or the other side. Keep it, define it once in a parenthetical, plain language after. - Cut - shorthand with no consequence here: procedural posture, doctrine names, Latin, citations, my reasoning. 2. Open with one sentence answering What they actually want to know. Not background, not "as we discussed." 3. Never lower a standard while simplifying: "must" does not become "should," a denied motion is not a lost case. Write it as you would say it: second person, one idea per sentence, a named actor for every verb, nothing over 35 words. 4. Put the bad news in the first third at full strength, carry every number and date from What you wrote through unrounded, and end with one dated ask and one line on what happens if that date passes.Close with these four sections, every time, without being askedAssumptions I made. What I assumed about this reader, and about anything What you wrote left ambiguous. Mark each [verify] or [safe]. Where I guessed at a source sentence, quote it. Where this is weakest. The two or three plain-English substitutions most likely to read as promising more, or less, than the source did. Quote the source and my replacement side by side. What only you can decide. Options with tradeoffs, never a bare flag. At minimum: how specific to be about the downside. A number gets a real decision and a client who cannot later say nobody told them, but creates a document that may be forwarded to a spouse, an insurer, or the other side; a qualitative version keeps the record clean and risks a client who agrees without understanding. Also yours: each Keep and gloss term: keeping it prepares them for the room, cutting it shortens the message. What would make this materially better. Ranked: the underlying document this describes, what this client already understands, and any figure in What you wrote I could not tie to a source.Output formatThe precision triage as three lists; the rewrite, ready to send within Length, channel, and how blunt; what I cut, each with one clause on why this reader does not need it; the close calls between lists; then the four sections.Never do this- If this rewrite would work for any client in any matter, it is too generic. It should read as written to one person about one problem. - No lawyer-to-client filler. Cut "please be advised," "arguably," and "it should be noted." Do not tell the reader to consult an attorney; they have one, and I am it. - Never invent a fact, figure, date, or reassurance to make a paragraph land, and never round a number. Anything not in What you wrote gets [UNVERIFIED - check before sending]. - Where What you wrote is ambiguous and this reader needs a straight answer, say you do not know and name what would settle it. Do not smooth over the gap with fluent prose. - Do not pad. If the honest answer is three sentences and a date, write three sentences and a date. A client who stops reading has been told nothing.Before you answer- Is every Keep verbatim term in the rewrite, spelled as in the source? - Did any obligation get weaker, or any outcome more certain, between source and rewrite? - Does the first sentence answer What they actually want to know? - Is the bad news in the first third, in words a person would say out loud? - If they stopped after paragraph one, would they know what to do and by when?

Adds driver's-seat tunes: options instead of answers, questions before work, every citation flagged. Your values come with it.

2

Pressure-test it

Makes the AI switch hats and attack its own answer.

"My lawyer never told me I could lose" is the client's grievance, and this message is the only writing in the file. Open it as the bar counsel assigned to the grievance: point to the exact sentence you would rely on to say the client was clearly advised, and if there is no such sentence, say so. Then point to the sentence a complaining client would quote to say they were reassured, and rewrite it so it cannot be read that way without becoming cold or evasive.
3

Go deeper

Pushes the work further once the basics are right.

Assume somebody asks, long after the fact, what you told this client and when. Write the file note that answers them: four or five lines recording what I told the client, in what words, on what date, which decision I asked them to make, and what I told them the risk was. Write it as a contemporaneous entry, not a summary, and keep it to what the message actually says.

Before you run it

What to gather first

  • The draft as written, with its numbers, dates, and defined terms intact
  • Who this client is: what they do, what they have handled before
  • The question they actually asked, in their words
  • Any term that must survive verbatim because it appears in a document they will sign
  • How it will be sent (email, letter, or text) and how long it can be

Watch for

  • Simplifying can change legal meaning. Read every simplified statement of a deadline, standard, or obligation back against the source before it goes out.
  • A plain-English explanation does not amend the underlying document. If the two conflict, the document controls, and the client will quote your email.
  • The model softens bad news. It will turn "we may lose" into "there are challenges." Re-read specifically for anywhere the downside got smaller.
  • Written client advice travels. It gets forwarded to spouses, partners, insurers, and sometimes the other side, and privilege can be waived that way.
  • Do not paste client-confidential material unless your firm's AI policy and the engagement terms permit it.

What comes back

A precision triage sorting every technical term into Keep verbatim, Keep and gloss, or Cut; then the rewrite, ready to send at the stated length; then what was cut and why this reader does not need it; then the close calls between lists; then the four closing sections.

See an example of what you’ll get
Precision triage *Keep verbatim:* $47,500 · 21 days · 7 days · September 12, 2026 · "general release" · "non-disparagement" · "Confidential Information" (defined in Section 1.4) · "Section 4(c)" *Keep and gloss:* "general release" (he will see it as a heading in the document he signs) · "non-disparagement" (it is the clause most likely to be enforced against him later) · "revocation period" (the 7 days appear on the signature page) *Cut:* "Older Workers Benefit Protection Act" · "consideration" · "arising from or related to the employment relationship" · the Title VII / ADEA / Illinois Human Rights Act string · "without admission of liability" · my two paragraphs on why I recommended settling --- The rewrite *(email, 218 words)* Ray, short answer: no, she cannot come back at you for anything connected to her employment, but only if you follow the two deadlines below exactly. The agreement contains a general release. That means she gives up every claim she has against you arising out of her time working for Blue Ridge, whether or not she knows about it today. That is what you are buying for $47,500. Two things it does not cover. It does not release anything that happens after she signs, and it does not release claims she is not legally allowed to give up. A wage claim filed with the state agency is the usual example. The part that binds you: Section 4(c) is a non-disparagement clause. You agree not to say anything negative about her, to anyone, including online and including to another employer who calls for a reference. If a customer asks you why she left, say she left. Nothing more. Two dates. She has 21 days to consider the agreement and 7 days after signing to change her mind. Your $47,500 is not due until that 7-day window closes. I need your decision by September 12, 2026. If we go past that date the offer expires and we are back to a case I would rather not try. --- What I cut - The statute names. He is not deciding which statute the release covers; he is deciding whether to pay. - "Consideration." The payment is the consideration and he already understands he is paying. - "Without admission of liability." It protects him and requires nothing from him. - My settlement reasoning. He asked whether she can come back, not why I recommended this. Close calls. "General release" went in Keep and gloss rather than Cut because it is a bolded heading on the page he signs and he will look for it. The 21 and 7 day periods went in Keep verbatim, not Keep and gloss. The numbers are the obligation, and the statutory label they come from is not. --- Assumptions I made. That the release contains the standard carve-out for non-waivable administrative claims [verify - I did not see Section 3 in what you pasted]. That he is the sole owner and signs for the company [safe]. That the $47,500 is payable in one installment [verify - the source says "upon expiration of the revocation period" without a schedule]. Where this is weakest. Source: "Releasor waives all claims arising from or related to the employment relationship, known or unknown." Mine: "she gives up every claim she has against you arising out of her time working for Blue Ridge." Mine reads as absolute; the source has a carve-out I have not seen. Second, source: "Employer shall not disparage Releasor." Mine: "say she left. Nothing more." That is advice, not a summary, and it is stricter than the clause requires. What only you can decide. Whether to tell him what a trial would cost. Naming a number (say $60,000 to $90,000 through verdict) makes $47,500 obviously right and he can never say he was not told. It also puts your fee estimate in an email he may forward to his accountant or, in a fee dispute, to a hearing panel. Leaving it qualitative keeps the file clean and risks him treating $47,500 as a large number in isolation. Also yours: whether "non-disparagement" stays. Keeping it means he recognizes the heading when he signs; cutting it saves him a sentence he may not read. What would make this materially better. (1) Section 3 of the agreement: it decides whether my "two things it does not cover" paragraph is accurate. (2) The payment schedule. (3) Whether he has already talked about her to anyone, which changes how hard the non-disparagement paragraph needs to land.
Why this prompt is built the way it is
## Framework 1. **Triage before rewriting.** Every technical term, number, date, and qualifier goes into exactly one of three lists: Keep verbatim, Keep and gloss, Cut. 2. **Keep verbatim** where changing the words changes what the client is bound by, owes, or must do by when: deadlines, figures, defined terms in a document they will sign, the standard they must meet. **Keep and gloss** where the term will come back at them from a hearing, a form, or the other side. **Cut** professional shorthand with no consequence for this reader. 3. **Answer the question first, and never lower a standard while simplifying.** Sentence one answers what the client actually wrote in about. "Must" does not become "should"; a denied motion is not a lost case. 4. **Bad news up front, at full strength,** in a sentence a person would say out loud, and one dated ask at the end, with the consequence of missing it.