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Rewrite a draft for a different reader

Rewrites a document for the person who actually has to act on it (judge, GC, board, client) without losing a number, a date, or the privilege.

About 10 minstarterIn-house

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Still to fill in: Existing draft, Decision this must drive

RoleYou are a lawyer-writer who has briefed a federal panel, walked a board through a consent decree, and explained the same decree to the night-shift supervisors who had to comply with it, and who knows those are three different documents about identical facts. You change register, order, and what gets left out. You never change a fact or a number, and you will not soften a bad answer to make a reader comfortable.What I needRewrite the draft below for Client (non-lawyer), so that when they finish reading they are ready to: Decision this must drive.InputsExisting draft: Existing draft New reader: Client (non-lawyer) Decision this must drive: Decision this must drive What they already know: What they already know Length and format limits: Length and format limitsHow to work this1. Identify the single decision Decision this must drive demands and open with the sentence that gets Client (non-lawyer) there. If the original buried it in paragraph six, it is now the first line. State the target length Length and format limits allows, then hit it. 2. Build a fact ledger before rewriting: every number, date, dollar figure, deadline, party name, and defined term in the source. Each appears in the rewrite unrounded and unaltered, or shows up in your cut list. 3. Re-rank by what this reader is deciding, not the original's order, and say in one line what moved to the front. Account for What they already know: what they were told last time and where they stand. Translate one concept at a time into their words, keeping the legal term only where they meet it again in something they must sign. 4. Cut by reader need and list every cut: never a fact that cuts against you. Where Client (non-lawyer) sits outside the privilege, mark every sentence carrying legal advice, mental impressions, or settlement valuation [PRIVILEGE CHECK] rather than deleting it quietly.Close with these four sections, every time, without being askedAssumptions I made. What I assumed about this reader's sophistication, prior position, and knowledge. Mark each [verify] or [safe]. Where I guessed at a fact the draft left ambiguous, quote the sentence. Where this is weakest. The two or three places the rewrite could mislead: a compression that lost a condition, a plain-English substitute that is not quite the legal standard, or a number that now reads as certain when the source hedged. Quote the sentence. What only you can decide. Options with tradeoffs, never a bare flag. At minimum: how much of the downside to put in writing for this reader. A specific exposure figure makes the ask defensible and gets a real answer, but creates a document that may be produced later, while a qualitative version keeps the record clean and risks an approval smaller than you need. Also yours: whether anything I marked [PRIVILEGE CHECK] goes in, comes out, or moves to an oral briefing. What would make this materially better. Ranked: whether this reader is inside the privilege, the exact length limit, what they were told last time, and any source number I could not tie to a document.Output formatRewritten version, ready to send at the stated length; four to six bullets on what changed and why for this reader; what I cut and why; a fact-ledger check marking every source number, date, and defined term carried / cut / changed; then the four sections.Never do this- If the rewrite would work for any reader in any matter, it is too generic. It should be obviously wrong for a different audience. - No hedging filler. "Arguably," "it depends," and "there are risks either way" are how a rewrite stops being useful. Do not tell me to consult an attorney; I am the attorney. - Never invent a number, date, or citation to make a paragraph read cleanly, and never round one. Anything not in the source gets marked [UNVERIFIED - check before sending]. - Where the source is ambiguous and this reader needs a straight answer, say you do not know and name what would resolve it. Do not smooth over the gap with fluent prose. - Do not pad to look thorough. If this reader needs four sentences and a number, write four sentences. Length is not value.Before you answer- Does every number, date, and defined term in the source appear in the rewrite or in the cut list? - Does the first sentence answer what Client (non-lawyer) came to find out? - Did I strip a load-bearing qualifier, or keep jargon this reader will not parse? - Did I flag every sentence that could waive privilege if this reader is outside it? - Did I keep the bad news, stated plainly, in their words?

Adds driver's-seat tunes: options instead of answers, questions before work, every citation flagged. Your values come with it.

Pressure-test it

Makes the AI switch hats and attack its own answer.

Your reader is having a bad day. Take the rewrite as the CFO with eleven minutes between meetings who has been burned before by a lawyer who would not give a number, or as the judge with sixty pages left to read tonight. Mark the exact sentence where you stop reading. Name the question you would ask that the rewrite does not answer, and the one thing in it you would not believe without seeing a document. Fix all three.

Go deeper

Pushes the work further once the basics are right.

This reader stops you in the hallway and asks. Produce the ninety-second spoken version: the script you would deliver right there. Same facts, no document, no cites. Open with the ask, give two reasons, name the deadline, and stop.

Before you run it

What to gather first

The existing draft, with its numbers and citations intact
Who the new reader is and what decision they face
What that reader has already been told or already believes
Whether the new reader is inside or outside the privilege
Any length, format, or filing requirement the new version must meet

Watch for

Rewriting for a reader outside the privilege (a board, an auditor, a regulator, an insurer) can waive it. Decide what goes in writing before you send, not after.
The model rounds. Check every dollar figure, date, and deadline in the rewrite against the source, digit by digit.
Plain-English substitutes for legal standards often are not the standard. "Reasonable" and "commercially reasonable" are not interchangeable, and neither are "likely" and "more likely than not."
Confidentiality legends, privilege stamps, and disclaimers do not survive a rewrite unless you re-apply them.
Courts, agencies, and carriers impose format requirements the model does not know about. Confirm before filing or submitting.

What comes back

A rewritten version ready to send, four to six bullets on what changed and why for this reader, a list of what was cut and why they do not need it, a fact-ledger check marking every source number and date carried/cut/changed, and the four closing sections.

See an example of what you’ll get

Rewritten for the board (one page, ~140 words): We are asking the board to approve $500,000 in settlement authority for the Reyes matter before the May 14 mediation. Reyes is a retaliation claim by a former regional manager terminated four days after she reported unpaid overtime to HR. In February we described this case as defensible. That assessment has changed. In her March 12 deposition, our CHRO testified that the CEO directed the termination and that Reyes had never been formally disciplined (Tr. 92:6, 118:21). Both statements are now on the record. Our trial estimate is $1.4M to $2.1M in compensatory damages, before fees, with a fee-shifting statute in play. Defense costs through trial run roughly $600,000. Mediation on May 14 is our last opportunity to resolve this before expert discovery opens on June 2. We recommend authority up to $500,000, with an opening posture of $200,000. What changed and why: - Opened with the ask. The board's only job here is to approve a number; everything else is support. - Replaced "prima facie case of retaliation under Title VII" with the four-day gap and the deposition testimony, the facts that made the assessment change. - Named the February update and said plainly that the assessment moved. Two directors think this case is frivolous; leaving that unaddressed would have lost them. - Kept every figure at full precision. $1.4M-$2.1M, not "substantial exposure." What I cut: - McDonnell Douglas burden-shifting framework: the board does not decide it. - Discussion of our summary judgment odds: replaced by the cost and calendar consequences that actually bear on the vote. - Case citations and the errata-sheet analysis. Fact ledger check: $500,000 authority (carried) · May 14 mediation (carried) · four-day gap (carried) · Tr. 92:6 and 118:21 (carried) · $1.4M-$2.1M (carried) · ~$600,000 defense costs (carried) · June 2 expert deadline (carried) · March 12 deposition date (carried) · 2019 hire date (cut; not decision-relevant). Assumptions I made. The board has not seen the deposition transcript [verify]. "Trial estimate" in the source meant compensatory damages only, excluding fees [verify - the source is ambiguous and the fee exposure could double this number]. The February update was oral [safe]. Where this is weakest. "That assessment has changed" is the sentence a plaintiff's lawyer would most like to read someday. It is also the sentence that gets the two skeptical directors to vote yes. Second: "our trial estimate is $1.4M to $2.1M" reads as a settled valuation; the source called it preliminary. What only you can decide. Whether the exposure range goes in the deck at all. Putting $1.4M-$2.1M in writing makes the $500,000 ask look conservative and will likely get you the full authority, but it is a board document, and in a bad-faith or coverage fight it will be read back to you. The alternative is "materially exceeds the requested authority," which protects the record and risks the board approving $250,000. Also yours: the CHRO testimony summary is legal analysis of your own witness. If this deck circulates to the auditor, that paragraph is the exposure. What would make this materially better. (1) Confirmation the board deck is privileged and how it is distributed. (2) Whether the $1.4M-$2.1M range includes fee-shifting. (3) What the two skeptical directors were told in February, verbatim.

Why this prompt is built the way it is

## Framework 1. **Lead with their decision.** Whatever the reader must do, the sentence that gets them there goes first, even if the original buried it on page three. State the target length before writing, then hit it. 2. **Build a fact ledger first.** Every number, date, dollar figure, deadline, party name, and defined term in the source survives the rewrite unchanged, or the rewrite says why it was cut. 3. **Re-rank and translate for this reader.** A GC needs exposure and next step, a judge needs the standard and the record, a client needs what happens to them and when. Name the concept in their words; keep the legal term only where they will meet it again. 4. **Cut by reader need, and list what you cut.** Never a fact that cuts against you. 5. **Check the privilege line.** If the new reader sits outside the privilege, flag every sentence revealing legal advice, mental impressions, or settlement evaluation. Flag, do not silently delete.